I believe
that Isabel Allende expressed of a good way the problem of gender roles in the
society, how the women are underrated in the society just because they are
women, because the society have the conception that women are inferior than
men, and it is something that we must change as society, and as country.
In Chile we
have advanced in this topic but there situations that we must change, I can say
that in general, men and women have the same opportunities of jobs but we don’t
have the same salary because the people yet have the conception that the women
are inferior than men, sometimes the companies prefer don’t give job to young
women because they can get pregnant and it is not convenient to the companies,
and I believe that it is unfair, having children not make us less than men and
women we can do the same thing with or without children.
By other
side, in Chile sometimes there particular situations that show us that the
machismo is a problem yet present, aren’t many situation but we can’t deny that
it exist. This situations are commonly by jealousy which finish in big
problems.
Maybe as
society we ignored that sexism is present, but I believe that is something that
is present every day in the life, in little thing like when we say that the
girls can’t play with cars or boys can’t play with dolls, or in common
situations in our house; for example when the grandma gives the dinner to the
grandpa first than the rest, well, some situations that we learned since we
were kids…
Well, today
this are different than years ago, the society change and the way of think
change, in my opinion the sexism isn’t strong like years ago but lamentably it
is present in the society, the change being with us, we can make the difference
for a good society .
I totally agree with you belen! if we all work together we can build a better society!
ReplyDeleteI agree with you, we as a society can make very important changes!
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I believe that Isabel Allende expressed (of) IN a good way the problem of gender roles in (the) society, how the women are underrated in (the) society just because they are women, because (the) society haS(ve) the conception …
…In Chile we have advanced in this topic but there ARE situations that we must change,
…because the people yet have the conception that the women are inferior than men,(REPEATS)
sometimes (the) companies prefer (don’t) NOT TO give A job to young women because they
…having children DOES not make us less than men and (women? We?) can do the same thing with or without children.
…(By other side) ON THE OTHER HAND, in Chile sometimes there ARE particular situations that show us that the machismo is a problem yet present, THERE aren’t many situation but we can’t deny that it existS. (This) THESE situations are commonly (by) jealousy which finishES in big problems.
Maybe as society we ignore(d )that sexism is present, but I believe that IT is something that is present every day in (the) life, in little thingS
… Well, today this (are) different than years ago, (the) society changed? and the way of thinkING changeS?, in my opinion (the) sexism isn’t strong like years ago but lamentably it is present in (the) society, the change (being) IS with us, we can make the difference for a good society .